(Author’s Notes) Sorry for the long wait, but this is my updated story of my first chapter. I only have a few more mouths before I head to Basic Training so I don’t have a lot of time to finish my long story. I hope you enjoyed my other first chapter because this is much better, I have changed the story line completely but has basically the same idea. I’ll let you read the story and find out what has changed. Please e-mail me! Send all e-mails to my new e-mail address missionman007@military.com (it was missionman007@hotmail.com to remind you) and I’ll get back to anyone who e-mails me. I forgot to tell you in my last story but my name is Victor Monzon, its Spanish for those who are wondering. I’m also know as Missionman007 because I am always on some kind of mission. One of my missions is introduce a theory that I have about Dimensional Travel. My theory is that it is possible to travel into a world such as Tenchi’s and live in his world just as you would ours, in other words, no cartoon Tenchi but the real thing. But there’s only on problem, I can’t prove it do to the fact we don’t have the technology to travel through time and space let alone leave our own planet. That is why I have decided to right this story to show anyone who reads this story how it might be possible to live in our fantasies. I know that some of you out there will read this and think I’m a nut case but hey we’re only human so dream on. When you read this story, you’ll find out about my special abilities in Tenchi’s world are a little farfetched. However, if my theory is correct it might be possible to have them in other dimensions. Well enough with my jabber read and enjoy the story and let me know what you think. Of course as you know I don’t own the characters. (Story Summery) What would happen if a person were able to enter another world; and live in that world just as if they were in this world? However, they would lose all memory and be given powers that would become one of the most powerfulest in the universe. In this story Tenchi will have a new character and that character is me. The story mainly takes place in the year 2003 with me being the youngest and smartest mechanical engineer of the First Dimension (also know as the dimension we live in) who was once a genetically enhanced COMSAT-XE soldier from the year 2200 of the Fourth Dimension (also know as Tenchi Maskai’s dimension). In my new life as a mechanical engineer I was called up to work for the United States Government, to work on a device that could travel to other dimensions. While working on the project the man that was replaced knocked me unconscious and sent me to another dimension by using the device. I ended up in Japan in another dimension not being able to remember anything on how I got there and why. Later on I run into a young man named Tenchi Maskai who takes me in after saving his life. The trouble begins when I find out he lives with six women from outer-space. As the story goes on, I start to remember my past as my past powers in the Fourth Dimension begin to form. The question is do I decide to go back and seek my revenge on the man who sent me to Tenchi’s dimension or do I stay with the Tenchi household forever? (Opening Song) “Enough” By Gravity Kills I love the thill, I love the scene. Imagine you in the white light, So beautiful, you watch me bleed You're stabbing me from inside me now, Kneel down and tell me about your world, Tell me something that I don't know You know nothing about the world around you. It's not enough broken in two, It's not enough speaking the truth It's not enough watching me bleed, It's not enough torn in between It's not enough--I'm watching you distorted view, So beautiful in the white light It's make believe, all that you see, It's haunting you from inside now, Kneel down and tell me about your world, Show me something inside your world, You know nothing about the world around you--It's not enough broken in two It's not enough speaking the truth It's not enough watching me bleed, It's not enough torn in between, It's not enough--Sometimes in me, you are the seed, A dying need in the white light. The simple truth, it speaks to me. It's screaming out from inside now. Kneel down and tell me about your world Tell me something that I don't know. You know nothing about the world around you--It's not enough broken in two, It's not enough speaking the truth, It's not enough watching me bleed, It's not enough torn in between It's not enough broken in two, It's not enough speaking the truth It's not enough watching me blee it’s not enough torn in between It's not enough. “When Two World’s Clash” (The Beginning of the COMSAT-XE) It was November 22, 1981, the newly formed United Space Combat-AE-2000, also know as USC-ae-2K, assembled the World’s Best Deep-Space Special Forces Unit code named; “COMSAT-XE”. Professor Frank Hast, founder of USC-ae-2K, sought to form the best genetically altered men in the Universe to defend the planets Earth and Juri from enemy threat. Out of 150 genetically altered men, Donny Haas; born in 1982, and I; born in 1983, were picked as test subjects in the newest type of experiential genetic technology. Unlike to other 148 men, whom were only fifteen times stronger and faster then any man. Donny and I where genetically altered to be fifty to sixty times stronger and faster then the Universe’s Strongest Man. Both of us were also given immortality, the ability to regenerate, and fitted with a special indestructible armor called Erumtanium. Our abilities along with our armor was what made Donny and I the most feared men in the universe. It was proven on July 11, 2001, when the out break of the First Universal War between Earth, Juri, and a planet called Oder. Oder, located 10,000,000 light years from Juri, sent a invasion force that was larger and more advanced the any Jurian Fleet. Its objective was to attack all the known planets and slowly move to Juri with the intent of taking over. The first battle took place on Earth itself when the invasion force of the planet Oder attacked the United States without warning. The United States suffered greatly with the lost of all of its forces in the battle. It was to be called the “Deadliest War in United States History” until the President George W. Bush cought word of the experimental COMSAT-XE. He called for the small unit in hopes of saving what was left of the United States. When Dr. Hast answered his call, Bush sent the unit to Mars, believed to be were the invasion force was stationed, to destroy any alien force inhabited there. After landing on the red planet a mouth later, Donny and I lead our forces into the inhabitable red planet. With the help of the Jurian Army we were able to fight off the robot forces that occupied the battlefield; however, the Jurian Army suffered just as greatly as the United States did in the first battle. After week into the “Battle for Mars” the Jurian Army pulled out and left me and my unit to finish the war. It wasn’t until a year into the war were we able to destroy most of the invasion force on Mars. The last Battle was to take place on Venus and we were at the brink of defeating the last of the invasion force. At the same time it was believed that a Space Pirate called Ryoko was fighting among the Venus battlefield. By order from the Juri’s Government I was to find Ryoko and bring he to Juri dead or alive. The bringing in of the Space Pirate Ryoko was given to me as a new objective sense we were winning the war and I was the only person believed to be a match for her. After the “Battle for Venus” was over I was left behind to find and capture Ryoko at any cost. To be Continued... (What’s Next) That is my first part of my story its a little short but I hope you still liked it the next part is called, “COMSAT-XE vs. Ryoko”. It should be done by the 1st of February. I plan to send at least two parts a week and hopefully be done before I leave so let me know what you think. Oh before I forget a friend and I are working on a new Tenchi Muyo computer game we are looking for anyone who knows how to make 3D models and knows a little about game programming. I am in charge of the story line and finding the equipment needed. My friend is the Chief Programmer. All we need are Modelers and Programmers we don’t care what country your from so long as you can read and write in English. This is just for fun we can’t pay you for your work but we will make sure you will get the credit for the help in the making of the game. So if your interested E-mail me and provide some information about yourself. If you qualify for the job I will give you the info about the story line, type, and plat form of the game.