Hey wad up everybody.Has anybody read my fixed version of episode 4 for those who read the first version of it I apologize for that you see my disk I did'nt know it was kinda messup.I was so confident on it that I didnt bother to check it.It won't happen again.Well anyways moving on as you all know the story has been revolving around the new characther lately I know but after episode 6 everything will revolving around Tenchi well most of it.Oh anybody at pioneer that is reading this please don't sue none except the 4 characthers are mine.Well anyways please read the whole story of this if you want me to e-mail you a copy you know where to e-mail me.All right I bet you guys are tired reading this so here it goes.Please enjoy. TENCHI WORLD EPISODE 5-Operation dragon hunt "Lets make a deal shall we"Jun Pao said, still holding Ping in the air "I'll forget what you have done to me a few minutes ago if you join my side"Jun Pao spoke in a deep voice,which seems very evil,he was bald man he was a7 ft tall man that is always waring white pants with a brown shoes,and had tatoos of different dragons all over his body."So what do you think Ping the space pirate?"With some breath still left in Ping he replied back "I don't know." "You don't know what!?"asked Jun Pao, his face draws closer to Pings.Then Ping replied "I don't know wether to tell you if you need breath mint or Toilet paper for your mouth because it really really stin..........",Jun Pao not leting him finish his comment,threw Ping across the room casuing him to hit wall and slide down to the ground uncaunscience,And then Jun Pao walk towards Ping,looked at him,and then kicked him while he was on the ground.Lord Grendoble who was present at the time could only watch Jun Pao's cruel action perform on Ping. "Now where were we?"Said Jun Pao"Oh thats right prepare to die Grendoble!"Then he walks towards Grendoble untill he heard a voice "Wasup man turn around!"Ping said Then Jun Pao turned around to face Ping but when he barely turned to see his face he found himself flying 2 feets away from him, he got back up and yelled "You fool nobody strikes Jun Pao and gets away with it!!!"Then Ping got ready to fight. "C'mon man I'm ready!"Ping said but then Jun Pao smiled and replied back "I would but it apears that I'm out numbered" "Huh?What do you mean?"Ping asked then he turns around to see an estimated number of 50 armed officers having their blasters aim at him and Jun Pao.But then suddeny a royalty dress women runs into the room and knelt down besides Grendoble. "Darling!Darling"The women said"Are you allright"trying to help up Grendoble at that moment Jun Pao quickly rushes to her and grabbed her by the hair. "So this is your wife huh?"said Jun Pao talking to Grendoble "Let her go!"Yelled Grendoble but then Jun Pao smiled and said "I would but she's my escape untill then we'll meet again Ping the space pirate"then he teleports himself to his space ship along with the Noble man's wife. "Allright you how did you get out your cell?"said the cheif,walking towards Ping "Wait!?"said Grendoble"this man saved my life"then he turns and looked out of the window. "Sir we will do all we could to get your wife back"the cheif said "I know.But please let Ping help I'm sure he'll prove usefull" "Him!"the cheif said "but he stole the galaxies police prized possesion the Hagasake" "No I didn't Hagasake came to me and that disk you have is his memory file"said Ping "Hmmmmm.Allright We'll look into this can you fly a one man ship?asked the cheif "Yea.I had some experience" "Allright Listen up you'll be transfered to Precient 22 Tommorow well discuss our plan to save Noble mans wife"said the cheif "But aint it too soon?"asked Ping "He wouldn't think that we would try to rescue her tommorow so c'mon on." The next day came and it was a fine morning like always at the house of Masaki..Kiyone had just awoke on the sofa in the living room.She yawned and looked around "Hey what the?"she said "Kiyone your awake."Mihoshi said "What happened?What happened to head quarters and where's Ping?"Kiyone asked Not before long G.Asake,G.Kamadake,Ryoko,Ayeka,Ryo-oki,and Sasami entered into the room "Hey your awake.I bought you breakfast in bed"said Sasami,handing Kiyone a tray of food "Thank you Sasami"said Kiyone,eating the food then she was rudely interupted when Ryo-oki jumped on her and said "Meow meow meeeow" "Oh I miss you to Ryo-oki"Kiyone said "Hows it been?"Ryoko asked "Fine"replied back Kiyone then Ryoko gave her a creepy smile and asked "Soooo who's this Ping guy" "Just a freind"she replied back "Oh I seee"Ryoko said "Miss Kiyone you have been gone for a long time"Ayeka said"We thought you would never come back" "Yes thank you for all of you to be waiting for me"said Kiyone"But I must go and find Ping"she got up,But then G.Asake stoped her "Miss Kiyone You must stay here and rest before you leave" "He is right"G.Kamadake said flaoting beside G.Asake"You must rest before you might colapsed" "Thank you for your concerned but I must go"Said Kiyone "But Kiyone you haven't even finish your breakfast yet."Sasami said "I know I'm sorry but I have to go and see what happened to headquarters"said Kiyone She was about to walk through the door when she saw Noboyukie and Tenchi eating breakfast at the table. "Good morning Kiyone"Tenchi said "Yes welcome back Kiyone"Noboyukie said Tenchi notice that she's about to leave and then said "Your leaving all ready?" "Yes I must"Kiyone said "Allright then good luck"Tenchi said, Kiyone smiled and then said "Thanks"then she walk outside to see the two knights training outside,they both stopped.faced Kiyone "Welcome back Lady Kiyone"they both said "Yes thank you"said Kiyone "Are you leaving allready?"K.Kamadake asked "Why so soon Lady Kiyone?"K.Asake asked "Something came up."Kiyone said "Oh I see"they both said"Good luck"then they both let her pass. "That reminds me" Kiyone said "Where's my ship?" At that moment Mihoshi walks outside and then said nervously "umm Kiyone you know while you were asleep,I bought you here by your ship." "Yeah so where is it?"asked Kiyone "Uhhhh eh heh heh its uhh it at the bottom of the lake" "WHAAAAAAAAAT"Kiyone said,she looked at the lake where she only could see the back part her ship up,and then she fell to ground.Washu walks by and notices the event. "Looks like somebody needs my help"Washu said "Yeah thanks Washu"Kiyone said while she was still on the ground Meanwhile back at the 22nd precient Ping and around 2,000 other officers are discusiing over the plan.The room was dark that Ping was in and the two cheifs are showing slides of Jun Pao and his pass outlaw operartions. "This is Jun Pao"said the 22nd precient cheif"He has killed 3,000 oficers,Hijaked 2,500 ships,performed 178 bank roberies,he has also kidnapped 98 people,and not to mention he attacked head quarters." "He is not to be taking lightly"said the original cheif"He is armed and dangerous I repeat he is arm and dangerous" "Yes that is right"said the 22nd cheif"Here is our plan the 34th,12th,and 45th precient are sending their officers to make an ambush at cordination 143,87.While they are keeping him and his men at bay we will come up from behind."Then the original cheif walked up to Ping and then said to everybody "The 20 men up front including Ping will be flying one man ships"he shows a picture of ship which looked like an f-16 fighter except fatter."This is the 56-1 special we copied this style from a planet called earth it is new and improve it comes with 45 spealized missles and 12y.u blaster rays."Then he yelled "does everybody understand!?" "YES SIR!!!!"The officers yelled "Allright"said the 22nd cheif"The grand marshell heard of this operartion and he gave it a go"The named of this operartion is Dragon Hunt and the code name is yellow dragon."Then he yelled"ALL RIGHT LETS GET THEM FOR WHAT THEY DID!!!" Everybody rush to their ship but before Ping got on his,he ran up to the cheif and asked. "Sir I was wondering if I could bring my freinds into this I 'm sure they are useful" "What"said the cheif"We are about to leave about in 1 hr.Well who are they?" "I'm sure you heard of them."said Ping "They were the 3 that worked along side of me at the Juria check point"2 of them are my trusted freinds Boomboi,Jyun,and my little brother Southi.Then the cheif replied "Oh so the Raving dragons wants to reunite once again.Well call them in." "I Allready did sir"said Ping he step aside to reveal 3 men one was Boomboi he looked to be around 26 had spiked up hair that has been highlited with brown,brown eyes,stood almost the same size as Ping,he wore a blue t-shirt,brown baggy pants and wore black slip on shoes.The other guy who was Jyun he looked to be around 24 stood almost the same size as Ping had blonde hair,blue eyes his hair was spiked except it went forward,he wore a black long sleeve shirt with blue baggy jeans,and white shoes.The last who was the shortest was a little bit smaller than Ping.He is Southi the brother of Ping.Him and Ping almost look alike he had black hair,with brown eyes,he had on a white long sleeve shirt with an orange shirt over it,he also had a blue baggy overall on,his hair was also spiked except it went forward.He also looked to be around 19.Then Ping said "These are my fellow comrades"said Ping Pointing at each of them"This is BoomBoi,Jyun,and my little brother Southi."The three looked up at the cheif like it was in an action movie.Then the chief replied "So these are the Raving Dragons Huh?" Southi wiped the serious look off his face and then said Joyfully "Hey yo wadup Dawg thanks for bringing us into this"Then the cheif fell to the ground "What?I didn't understand that first part"said the cheif and then he pops back up again"Let me guess judging by your slang all 4 of you came from Kampakechia(Kamp-Puck-Chia)" "Yeaaah you guess it"said Boomboi then he went up to Ping and then gave him some daps "Yeah man"Jyun said then he jumped on Pings back,put him in a headlock and then gave him noogie"Was up Ping my man its been awhile!"then finally he lets go "I thought we talked about that"said Ping,combing his hair foward,Then Southi walked up to Ping and hugged him "Hey my brother we finally see each other again"then he lets go of Ping "Yeah I know little bro"said Ping "You know Ping"said Jyun"Working for the Juria military is one thing but helping five-0 man you ask for to many things yo"Then Boomboi said joyfully "Oy buk haunee man Ping you changed foo!." "Ahem!"said the chief"Here is our plan we have already gotten 3 ships ready for you guys and uhhhh...."But before he could finish he was interupted by the siren.An officer runs in and yells "Were about to begin the operation sir!"then he runs out to his ship "Shoot! You guys already Know what the plan is right?"asked the cheif "Dont worry"the 3 said"Ping here allready told us" "Allright lets get going were ready to catch some pirates"said Boomboi "Man How corny is that!"said Jyun "This aint no anime movie.You mean we bust some pirates"then the 3 ran to their ships,and took off,but before Ping got his ship he was stopped by the cheif "Ping."he said "Yeah"Ping replied back "You called me sir" "I did"said Ping "It must be a habit" "I'll be overseeing the operartion by the reserve force"said the cheif "Good luck alright" "Thank you sir"said Ping then he got on the one man ship and flew off along with the other 3,After a few minutes of flying they met up with the other ships. Meanwhile Kiyone and Mihoshi are at the beat uped Headquarters where they are stoped by an oficer who would'nt let them pass. "Why won't you let us pass"asked Kiyone "Yeah why not"said Mihoshi "Look we can't let anybody pass not even fellow officers"said the ofiicer "What? but I am 1st class detective and you are only a patrol officer"said Kiyone "I have my orders"said the officer "But we want to talk to Ping"said Kiyone "C'mon I'm sure you boyfreind is fine"said Mihoshi "Yeahh I guess your.......WHAT DID YOU SAY!!!!"said Kiyone "He is not my boyfreind.He is just a friend and I'm concerned."The officer heard their conversation and then said "Oh Ping he's at the 22nd preceint helping the with the operation" "You mean he's at the 22nd preceint and he's helping them?"said Kiyone "There you go Kiyone he is safe now lets go back home"said Mihoshi "What do you mean?We have to find Ping"said Kiyone "No I dont want to"Mihoshi whined out "C'mon Mihoshi we have to"said Kiyone "How about this I'll wait here and you could come back for me?"said Mihoshi "No we'll waste more time that way Mihoshi"said Kiyone then she drags Mihoshi towards Yuigame,Mihoshi who was kicking and whining said "No No I don't wanna Its to dangerous noooo waaaaaaaaah" "Come on now Mihoshi"Kiyone said"Ping this better be worth the trip" TO BE CONTINUE.................... Tenchi:Hey everybody on our next episode Ping and his three friends are doing their best on the operation. Ryoko:Not to mention that Kiyone is mader then ever at Ping and she has a surprise for him ho ho ho hum. Tenchi:Also the cheif ask them to go through 3 months of training so they could become police oficers.and finally I get to meet Kiyone's freind Ping.Will I be able to like Ping enough to call him friend or will he like me enough to call me friend.Coming up is episode 6-We finally meet. Ayeka:Its been questionabaly long