No Need for a Demon Imposter, part one: The First Adventure By Elemen the Bard section: regular blurb: OAV episode one, this time Ryoko isn't the first demon to arrive. Disclaimer: Don't want to spend to much time on this so: Tenchi Muyo is owned by AIC/Pioneer, I do not even act like I own them, so leave me alone, and please don't sue me. Oh yes, and all you Ryoko fans, Ryoko acts and thinks a //little// //tiny// bit different in this fanfic than in many others. <(word/sentence)> =English *(sentence)* =Chinese *(word)* =sound //(sentence)// =thoughts //(word)// =emphasis Story: "Ite! Stupid rock!" Kai yelled at the thing he had just stubbed his toe on. "Now where'd Tenchi go? Granddad wanted me to get him but where is he?" the eldest Masaki asked himself. He walked up out of the forest and stood up and looked around. "That you Kai?" Tenchi yelled down from a rather tall rock in front of the cave he liked so much for some reason. "Tenchi! Get down from there! Grandpa wants to talk to you!" Kai yelled up to his younger sibling. "Okay! I'll be right down," and he was, he jumped right down off the top of the rock and stood back up again. "Now go and talk with Grandpa, or else you might get more sword practice," Tenchi visibly shuddered. "Go now and he might not force you," Tenchi ran off at a speed higher than mach two. "I wonder how he runs so fast," Kai remarked to noone in particular. Suddenly Kai felt the hairs on the back of his head stand on end, as if he was being watched. ~|. Far away, across millions of star systems, the Soja floated slowly in the direction of earth. The owner of the ship was lucky, both of his servants were there on this planet. He smiled to himself, turned, and went deeper into the ship to mock the only other passenger on the ship. ~|. Kai brushed it off and walked back in the direction of the house, he couldn't shake the feeling of being watched. He brushed a lock of dark blue hair out of his eye and sighed, seven short weeks until school started, and he would be bored out of his skull for another year. When he was almost back to the shrine he heard the klack of bokkens. 'Tenchi wasn't quick enough apparently,' he thought, and walked over to the direction of the sounds. Halfway to the training clearing, he realized that the sounds weren't coming from there, they were coming from near the lake, not too near the lake, but still a good twenty meters further than he expected. When he got to where the sounds were coming from all that was there was one man in a very elegant dress hitting a bokken against a wooden training post. Then suddenly, the man faded, as did the sounds, and most of the post, now all that was there, was a rotten log, sticking out of the ground. "Wha?" Kai said, turning to look right into the face of a beautiful woman, holding an energy sword that seemed right out of star wars. Well, not right out of Star Wars, for one thing It had no handle, and for another no sword from Star Wars would ever be pointed at his face. "You will Die Yosho!" she cried out. Suddenly Kai realized she wasn't looking at him, but Past him, to the man in elegant dress. He had reappeared, but now he looked a little older, and he was holding a sword that looked a lot more like a light-saber than her's. Then quite suddenly he heard someone call his name, and everything around him snapped into focus. The rotten log sticking out of the ground, the trees around him, and the fact that neither of the two people he had just seen could not possibly be real. "Kai!" Tenchi yelled from the top of the hill. "Hey, Tenchi! What is it?" Kai asked turning to face the younger sibling. "Come up here! I've got something you //have// to see!" Tenchi yelled. "'Kay, I'll be right up!" Kai said, turning away from the ancient training grounds. From the rotting bokken lying on the ground near the post, with the name inscribed on it: Yosho. -|. "Okay Tenchi, spill it, what do you have that's so important?" Kai said, when he reached the top of the hill. "Well, ya know the old keys Grand-pa always keeps with him?" Tenchi asked, sounding thoroughly overjoyed about something. "Yeah, those are the keys to the demon's cave…. You didn't…" Kai trailed off. "I did, I have 'em right here!" Tenchi said, pulling out an old rusted pair of keys from his shirt pocket. "Tenchi you know we're not supposed to go up there!" Kai exclaimed. "SHHH! Keep it down! I don't want Grandpa to hear us!" Tenchi hissed. "You mean Grandpa doesn't know you have those keys?" Tenchi nodded in affirmation. Kai's lips curled up into a smile. "Well if he doesn't know… I guess he can't stop us…. And what he doesn't know won't hurt him right?" Tenchi nodded, beginning to grin widely. "Then what are we waiting for? Lets get going!" Kai finished grabbing the keys from Tenchi, and running down the steps in the direction of the cave. "Hey! Wait for me Kai!" Tenchi called out, running after him. ~|. Her spirit floated above the two boys, she giggled lightly. They had been silly since before they could talk, and now was no different. She heard their shouts and the wildlife around her, and saw everything that was happening. But she could not feel it, she could not smell the sweet air around her spirit, for she was really trapped under a mask in a chamber full of water, hidden by a rock that had a ward on it. But these boys… she wouldn't be a prisoner much longer, she would be free, free to destroy! Free to ravage!… but the years she had spent trapped had changed her.. Now she thought about what she had done. She had realized her error. The destruction she had caused now tore at her soul. She wished to be free again, but not to do as she had done all those years ago. Back then she was merely a demon, good for nothing but destruction, now she wished to atone for her transgressions. She had developed a growing affection for these two boys. They were silly, smart, kind, and even caring. When their mother died, she comforted them, when the snow fell lightly on the ground, and the tears had come just as readily she had projected herself, and had comforted them. She had watched them grow in size and knowledge, and skill. The younger, Tenchi, was in training with his grandfather in how to use a sword. The older one, Kai, needed very little help, he took to it like a fly to sugar, it was almost like he already knew everything his grandfather was going to teach him. But now things would be different. Now she wouldn't have to watch them from afar, like so many others. Now she would be free to walk with them, talk with them, be with them as they grew into men. She would live much longer than they would though, they would come and pass like the dust in the wind, but she would treasure them when they were here. They were closer now, they had already reached the cave, and she could hear them opening the gate with the keys they had borrowed. She would be free…. ~|. Kai turned the keys in the large rusted lock, he probably could have just broken it off on his own and he might not have even needed the keys. Tenchi came running up behind him, huffing and puffing. Kai unhitched the lock and dropped it on the ground with a loud "Clang!" Tenchi flinched. "What took you so long Tenchi?" Kai said, smirking. "You aren't the slowest of people around you know Kai…" Tenchi trailed off, huffing and puffing. "Yes well…" he opened the gates, and motioned for Tenchi to go in. "Ladies first" he said smiling broadly. "Hey!" Tenchi exclaimed. "I was just kidding." Kai said, walking into the cave. He suddenly felt a wave of heat, then a wave of cold wash over him. He collapsed as he suddenly felt like a thousand needles were being driven into his skin. "Kai!" Tenchi ran over to his brother, his shirt caught along the way. Tenchi turned to see what it had caught on, it was an old ward, the ink had almost worn away on it, but it was still there. Tenchi freed his shirt, but tore half of the ward off the wall in the process. Suddenly, the needling pain ended. It was almost like a hand had brushed the pain off of him like snow, or rain. Kai got up and rubbed the back of his head. Tenchi ran over to him with part of the ward still stuck to his shirt. "Are you okay?!" he asked in a worried tone of voice. "Yeah I'm fine… It's just something that happened when I walked into the cave… hey, what's that?" Kai finished the last part pointing to something that looked like and old sword case, with a ward on it too. "Not sure... could it be the sword from the legend?" Tenchi asked. "Only one way to find out." Kai walked over to the case and reached out to grab one of the handles. Suddenly his hand reached a resistance of some kind. It wasn't like a wall, more like the material that balloons are made out of was in the way, and he couldn't quite reach the case. Tenchi watched his brother reach out an arm to the case, when his hand stopped it looked to him like his brother was hesitating. Tenchi walked over to him, "What's wrong?" he asked. "There seems… to be something in the way…" Kai said, straining himself, pushing against the invisible force with his hand. "I don't see anything…" Tenchi replied, reaching out his hand to grab the handle of the case. Nothing stopped his hand. There was nothing in his way when he opened the case, exept for the stiff paper ward that was over the center of the case. When Tenchi opened the case he ripped the ward in two. "Oh great, Grandpa's gonna kill us for this," Tenchi groaned when the ward ripped. Kai was just about to push with all his might when Tenchi ripped the ward. Kai pushed, and fell forward his forehead impacting with the case, as the resistance suddenly disappeared. "Ite…" Kai said, rubbing his forehead. "You okay Kai? Are you hurt?" Tenchi said putting a hand on his brother's shoulder. "I'm fine, it's just my pride…" Kai trailed off, still rubbing his head, and got up. "Woah! Kai take a look at this!" Tenchi said, looking into the case. "What is it?" Kai asked looking around the edge of the case to look inside at whatever was in there. It was a sword. But it didn't seem to be your ordinary sword though. Its hilt was wrapped in cloth, like they normally are, it was sheathed, but it had three gems embedded in the pommel of the sword. Plus the sheath and the hilt looked like brand new, like someone was coming in here every week and polishing them. Kai grabbed the hilt around the part that was cloth. "I wonder if the blade is just as new…" he said, thinking about the thing. "Why not check!" he grabbed the sheath with all his might, and pulled it off. Kai, and Tenchi, were both //very// disappointed. The blade actually showed it's age and was so rusty you couldn't tell it was even a blade originally. "What a piece of junk." Tenchi said, grabbing it out of his brother's hands. "I can't believe this is the sword that cuts through stone." He said, lazily letting it fall on a rock that had a ward on it. When the blade impacted with the rock three things happened. First, the blade shattered into a thousand rusty pieces. Second, the rock split in two, including the ward that was on it. Also third and finally, the wall behind the rock split down the center, and moved aside, revealing a passage that was otherwise hidden before. "Holy…" Tenchi gawked at the passage. Kai recovered quickly. "Are you going to sit there all day? Or are you going to explore it? Let's go!" Kai charged into the passageway, and almost instantly disappeared down it. "Hey wait for me Kai!" Tenchi Yelled, getting up from where he had collapsed into a sitting position, and charged into the passageway. Tenchi immediately found out why his brother had disappeared so quickly, the passage was on a deeply sloped incline, and had water up to his ankles between the wide cracks in the floor design. Tenchi slipped almost immediately, and lost his grip on the hilt of the sword. As he reached for it, he only slid down further, and then lost his grip on the passage entirely, he slid all the way down to the bottom, and when he landed the hilt found a way to land on his head, and then in his hands. Tenchi rubbed his head as he looked around. The chamber was huge. The area around him was just like the passage, stone walls, and the gapped floor design, but there was a sunken portion further in. Kai was standing practically in the center, up to his knees in the water, staring down at something under the water, that was beneath a giant green crystal that was suspended from the ceiling by a lot of cables. "Hey Kai!" Tenchi called out, getting up off the ground and walking on the stones so he wouldn't get any more wet than necessary. Kai didn't respond, he seemed to be in a world of his own. When Tenchi got there, he saw what Kai was staring at. Kai was looking at a girl, who seemed a little older than they were, who was wearing an old mask, and a long kimono-like-thing that floated slightly in the water. What's more, she had curves in all the right places, and it seemed like she was starting to move. "Kai… d'you suppose that this, could be the demon that all the legends talked about?" Tenchi asked, staring at the girl. "Could be Tenchi." Kai replied. "I think we'd better get outta here Kai." Tenchi grabbed Kai's shoulder and started pulling him back towards the passage. Quite to Tenchi's surprise, he felt a cold, wet, skinny hand on his. It was far to slender to be Kai's, so it must have been… Tenchi gulped and turned to look. Sure enough, there attached to the other end of the hand, was the girl from the pool, a soft yellow-brown glow coming from inside the eyeholes. This was too much for Tenchi, he tightened his grip on his brother's arm, and ran up the passage, tied the rock back together with a handy vine, ran out the gates, closed them locked them, and ran up towards their house. He did all of this without letting go of Kai's arm. ~|. She sensed their presence in the cave. She knew that she should return to her body soon. And she //felt// the pull to return as one of them, probably the younger one, broke the seal to her chamber. She returned to her body, and felt all those things she had felt many years ago, including… Water? She was completely submerged in a pool of water. She started to regain focus and the ability to control he limbs, just as one of the two, obviously Kai from his hairstyle. Walked over to the edge of her little pool. Even as far away as he stood, which was at least a couple of yards; it was still knee deep. The other boy walked up soon after, and she began to sit up. She saw the younger one turn away and grab his brother's arm. She stood, and placed a kind hand on that of the younger boy's. She got a reaction that she had hoped never to see again from the boy. A look of absolute terror flooded his features. Her heart tore to see him like that. His brother had a very different reaction, it was almost, joy? Anyway… He took his brother and ran up the passageway. From the slam of rocks together she guessed that he had temporarily restored the seal to her chamber. She could barely feel the tears go down her cheeks, and even when she did she could not distinguish when they were tears, or just water. She took off the hideous mask that had been placed over her face while she was sedated, and slowly stalked up the passage into the rest of the cave. She remembered how the ward would block her teleporting, or phasing through the rock wall, but this time only half the seal's effect would work. She phased easily through the wall, and walked out of the cave. She looked around and started to fly in the direction that she remembered the house was in. she then decided against it, and went to find someplace to eat. ~|. Tenchi burst in the door huffing and puffing. Kai pulled his arm way from the terrified Tenchi, and rubbed his shoulder. "Just rip my arm off why don'tcha. What's your problem Tenchi?" Kai said, circling his arm, trying to work the feeling back into it. Tenchi face-faulted. "What's my problem?! That demon! The thing in the ca--!" Tenchi was yelling before he was cut off by Kai's hand over his mouth. Kai said nothing but just pointed in the direction of the living room. "Hello boys…" Their grandfather trailed off. Kai took a sadistic pleasure in feeling his younger brother Tense suddenly, turn to stone, then crumble under his hand. Nobyuki looked at the pieces of his son on the ground. "What's wrong with him?" Nobyuki said, absolutely oblivious to the fact that he had just screamed where he had been. "I have no idea, *Slurp*" their Grandfather Katsuhito said, taking a slurp of his tea. "I'm sure it's nothing," Kai said calmly. "You know how easily Tenchi goes to pieces, right dad?" "Right, well you'd better get him to bed, you two both have school tomorrow remember?" "Right dad." Kai picked up the pieces of the catatonic Tenchi and carried them to their room. -|. The next day at school Tenchi had nearly forgotten about the incident at the cave, apparently his grandfather either didn't notice that they had been in the cave, or didn't care. He and Kai arrived at school with time to spare. He sat down at his desk and Toni walked up to him. "Hi Tenchi, how was your summer?" she asked, standing next to Tenchi's desk and leaning on it. "It was fine, how was yours Toni?" Tenchi replied. Toni was from a family who moved to Japan because of business, she and her family were the closest people to the remote shrine up in the wilderness that Tenchi called home. She had been over several times in the summer, his dad embarrassing him, but Kai making up for his fathers, um, unique attitude. "Same as usual, pinned as a 'Gajin,' learned how expensive things are in Japan, found out that I did have a couple of friends even though everyone else alienated me, that sort of thing." Toni was from another country, and people here in Japan don't like "gaijins" or foregners. "Heh, sorry about that, it's just how some people are, luckily my family is more tolerant than most." Tenchi said sweat-dropping. "Oh don't worry about it Tenchi, it's not your fault that people don't like me, you and your brother are some of the nicest people I've met, and I'm including people in America." Toni replied, trying not to agitate Tenchi. "Well, anyway.. did you meet anyone new over the summer?" "Oh! no, not really, no one new," Tenchi just remembered yesterday at the cave, and somehow, her comment made him think she knew. His mind fell back to the sword hilt he forgot to put back in the case. It was now sitting in his backpack. "Oh really?" she said sarcastically. "You aren't hiding something from me are you Tenchi? Another woman in your life? I must know!" and with that she was about to start tickling Tenchi, when the Teacher walked in. Toni muttered something in English it sounded like 'shaved my the beds' or something. Tenchi had no idea what that meant. "Hello class, and welcome back. Your useless frolicking over the summer has wasted precious time of the year so let's jump right in. Turn to page 47 in your science booklets…" The teacher continued on after that, but Tenchi zoned out, and was very lucky that he wasn't caught. He couldn't get his mind off of the girl from the cave, and if she really was the demon. Eventually lunch-time came along, and Tenchi walked along with Toni and a couple of other friends. They met up with Kai and sat down to have lunch under a tree. Toni sat closest to Tenchi, while his other friends sat next to Kai, who had a friend of his own. "So Kai, was your Teacher as sour as ours was this morning?" one of Tenchi's other friends asked, trying to start up a conversation. "Actually, your teacher was only sour because he has a reputation to keep up, our teacher was downright nice." Kai said, leaning back against the tree. "Damn, why do we get all the bad teachers?" the other friend of Tenchi's cursed. "It's just our lot in life Soju, deal with it," Tenchi's first friend said, lying back on the grass, a piece of sushi stuck in his mouth. "Who asked you Toji?!" Soju snapped. "You did that's who!" "I did not!" "Yes you did!" "It was a rhetorical question!" As the two of them continued to fight Toni got up holding onto Tenchi's arm. Tenchi gave her an inquisitive stare, and she crouched down. "Come on, let's leave these bozo's to each other," Tenchi had no idea what 'Bozo's' meant, but he got up and went with her anyway. Kai's friend was stepping in to try to calm Tenchi's two friends down, and Kai noticed Tenchi and Toni sneaking off. Kai being the curious person that he was, he got up and went off to follow them. They walked up the stairs, and exited onto the roof. Tenchi followed Toni as she took him out onto the roof. She walked with him over to the railing, and looked out over the school grounds. Tenchi leaned on the railing and noticed that her brow was furrowed. "What's wrong Toni?" Tenchi asked. "Hmm? Oh nothing, I was just thinking about something.." she trailed off. This did not answer Tenchi's question so he pressed onward. "Well what were you thinking about?" Tenchi pursued. "Well… actually I was thinking about you." at this point Tenchi 'urked' and stood stock-still over the railing. Toni noticed, and giggled. "It's nothing like that Baka," she said, slapping him on the back, "it's just that you're the only person who's been nice to me since I got here. "Think nothing of it, I know how it feels to be an outsider as well…" "Really, Tenchi?" "It's nothing really, it's just that for a couple of years when I was young, my family and I took a long business trip to the US." "Really? Why haven't you ever told me about this?" "Well, it never really came up." "How long did you and your family stay in America?" "About two years, Dad's company had gotten a rally big office building project, and they sent him to oversee it." "Wow…" Toni trailed off, she stared at him. "Well…" "Hmm?" Tenchi turned to look at her. She looked as if she wanted to say something, but couldn't. She sighed. "I'd better be getting back to class. Talk to you later Tenchi." "Yeah, bye Toni." She walked away. Tenchi sighed and leaned on the railing… He sighed and sat down against the railing, thinking about it. Two things happening in one week was far too much for him…. ~|. He must have fallen asleep because when he opened his eyes again it was dark. "Oh real smart Tenchi, you're really gonna get it now." Tenchi said to himself. He wandered towards the door, but stopped short when he heard a faint mewing sound. He turned around and saw a cat. "Hey kitty, what are you doing here?" he wondered walking over to pick up the cat. Unfortunately for Tenchi's nerves, the cat disappeared into thin air, running towards something that was behind him. Tenchi turned around, but almost immediately regretted it. For there, sitting on top of part of the building was the girl from the cave, still in the same garb, except without the mask. She held in her hand the small collar with bells that the cat had been wearing. She tossed it to him. "I am Ryoko." She said softly, and simply. Tenchi looked at the bells in his hand, and they disappeared as well. He looked back up to the girl. "Could you be kind to a lost cat who has gone astray?" "Huh?" Tenchi said, he didn't understand. "What do you mean." "You would be welcoming to a cat wouldn't you?" "Uh, yeah, I guess…" "And yet to something just as nice, but hidden behind a mask you feared and ran from." The girl floated down level with Tenchi. "Umm." Tenchi at this point was getting quite uncomfortable, partially because the distance between them was small and getting smaller. "Why did you run from me Tenchi?" Her face was mere inches from his, he could feel her breath on his face. "I-I I was-ss-s a-afraid…" Tenchi stuttered. "Why Tenchi?" "I…" "Tenchi…" she looked as if she was about to say more, but she didn't have the chance. A light flared above their heads. It streamed down and impacted with the cement below them. Tenchi was thrown back and landed on the ground, Ryoko was slammed into a wall, making a slight dent. "The space pirate Ryoko! I never thought you would fall for someone from such an underdeveloped planet such as this!" A floating figure said, a billowing cloak hiding and masking all of himself, he was also obviously masking his voice. Tenchi tried to lift himself up on one arm, but pain lanced through it. The shoulder had been dislocated when it impacted the roof. The figure floated down, and with a covered hand lifted Tenchi up by the chin. "He isn't much of a catch now is he? Small, skinny, weak, and prone to injury, look one fall and his shoulder breaks…" the figure twisted Tenchi's body from side to side, holding him by either the neck or chin. "Put him down!" Ryoko's shoulder impacted with the figure, knocking him back several feet, It dropped Tenchi and Ryoko grabbed him before he landed on his shoulder again. The figure got back up and extended something that looked like a glowing shortsword. He flew at Ryoko, Pushing Tenchi aside, without damaging him, and slashed at Ryoko's stomach. Ryoko Jumped out of the way, and back to the point where she appeared. "Who are you?" "Someone." The person slashed downward, missing Ryoko again, but making the block uprising in the building two very nice pieces. "Stop it!" Ryoko dodged another strike from the guys sword, which left a long thin crater in the building roof. "No." the figure prepared to slash again when Tenchi said: "Hey what's that thing in the sky!?" then he whispered: "There's absolutely no way that worked." Tenchi turned around, the figure was scanning the sky. "What's going on? I don't see anything. Are you sure you saw some… thing." The figure had turned around to the sight of an empty rooftop. "Hey!" ~|. Tenchi Ran down the stairs with Ryoko's hand in his, her trailing behind him. "We have to get out of here before that… //thing// shows up again." Tenchi stopped and turned around "You're a demon aren't you? Can't you do something?" "I'm //not// a demon! And I don't want to fight anymore!" Ryoko replied. "Fine, fine. But can't you at least get us out of here?" "I can try--" again she was cut off by an explosion, it game from down the hall from them. "Get back here!! You aren't supposed to run!" the thing was running towards them. "Do something!" "I can't!" Further conversation was cut off by one of the weird short light-saber things flying cleanly between them. Tenchi decided that against the wall would be the best place for him to be. "Now, now Ryoko, come on, don't make it so hard on yourself. Give it up!" the man rushed at her, but she wasn't there. He looked behind him, a little to slow. A beam of orange-ish energy had situated itself inside where the person's forehead would be. The figure rolled back and the beam dissipated, the hood fell away revealing a quite featureless metal face. A cracked glass plate with a hole in it revealed where the visual sensors had been, also where the beam had penetrated. It was a robot. And it was beeping slightly (never a good thing). The realization hit Ryoko like not quite a ton of bricks but an approximate weight somewhere around a ton. She grabbed Tenchi and teleported him out of the building. They both stood in the street outside of the building as nearly half the thing exploded. Ryoko once again teleported before the various large bits of falling debris crushed them kind of like the realization that hit Ryoko earlier. (I. E. a weight of bricks not quite a ton, but almost.) -|. Tenchi stood frozen solid. He just saw his school building explode. He took a step forward. It //looked// like he was in front of his house. He pinched himself. Yep, it hurt. He wasn't dreaming. He opened the door, maybe the school exploding was just a dream. "I'm home!" Tenchi called out. After all, where was the girl if it was real? "Tenchi where have you been? Why were you missing in the afternoon?" Kai called from where he was watching TV in the living room. Okay, maybe he did sleep the afternoon away, but he must have taken a late bus home or something right. "I think I fell asleep." Tenchi replied. Then something shattered all his illusions. The news broke in on the channel Kai was watching. "We interrupt your regularly scheduled programming for this late breaking story!" the news caster said. "What?" Kai said, sitting up. "Tonight there was a devastating explosion at Hokkidore high school. Luckily no one was present in the part of the building that was destroyed by the detonation, but nearly half the building was taken out by the explosion. Police are baffled and have found no evidence of the bomb that caused the explosion…" "That's our High School! Tenchi?!" Kai turned to find an empty entryway behind him. ~|. Tenchi closed and locked the door to his room. It was impossible. There was no way that was real… Wait a minute. There was something wrong with the room. And it wasn't the mini-squid scuttling on the window sill. The bed was a bit more lumpy than it should have been. Tenchi gulped and walked slowly over to the bed. He slowly slipped the covers down, and found just what he was hoping not to find. There was the girl. ~|. Katsuhito was very intrigued when he heard an interestingly high pitched yell echo through the valley where the shine and his son in law's house were. It sounded much like a mini squid going through a paper shredder…. To be continued… ---------- Authors notes: Done! Done! I'm Done!!! I finally finished this! It's my first work since "Visions" two or three years ago!! If you like it! Tell me!! I would be overjoyed to hear that someone actually liked one of my stories. If you want more! Tell me!! That might be the only way for me to actually get moving on another part of this story! I am also working on a Street fighter fanfic called "Daylight in the night" part one out soon, prolog done, but not up yet. And now I can get to work on an original work I call "Soldier Red" or "Secret Mana" Tell me which one of those titles you like better, Please! Anyway. This has been in the works for a while, it just went on the back burner for a //long// time. But before I bore you too much, I'll stop talking, remember, e-mail me with your suggestions! (If you want to se what I have on either of the other mentioned stories, e-mail me and ask.) Elemen the Bard. ICQ# 58465662 E-mail: king_elemen@hotmail.com Homepage: www.geocities.com/elemen_the_bard/ © 06/08/2001